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Hedvig Sleeps on It—and Changes Her Mind
海德维格睡醒以后,觉得那件事不对了
海德維格睡醒以後,覺得那件事不對了
The Wild Duck · Henrik Ibsen
野鸭 · 亨利克·易卜生
野鴨 · 亨利克·易卜生
An adult's advice loses its beauty by morning. Hedvig's second thought deserves to be heard as judgment, not merely a failure of courage.
昨晚听来美好的建议,早晨失去了意义。孩子的重新考虑,为什么只被大人听成缺少勇气?
昨晚聽來美好的建議,早晨失去了意義。孩子的重新考慮,為什麼只被大人聽成缺少勇氣?
These readings discuss key scenes and endings. They read the plays, not particular stage or screen productions.
本系列涉及关键剧情与结局,阅读对象是剧本文本,而非某一场舞台演出或影视改编。
本系列涉及關鍵劇情與結局,閱讀對象是劇本文本,而非某一場舞台演出或影視改編。
Hedvig has slept on it. She has not done what she agreed to do the previous evening. When Gregers sees her, he says he can tell. She explains that her courage did not simply fail at the decisive moment. Waking early and thinking again, she found the proposal strange. It had seemed beautiful at night. By morning she could no longer see what was in it.
The proposal was to sacrifice her beloved wild duck so that her father would believe in her love. This conversation comes in Act V of Ibsen's The Wild Duck. Hjalmar has left the house, and his daughter fears that he will never want her again. Gregers, his old friend, has sought to expose the family's deceptions and enable a new life. The person now expected to provide something precious for that renewal is the child who did not create those deceptions.
The previous evening, Hedvig scarcely understood what she had done wrong. Learning about Gina's past, Hjalmar has questioned whether he is the child's father and pushed her away. Gina wants him to look at his daughter. After he leaves, the child begs her mother to bring him back. Gregers would allow Hjalmar to complete his inward struggle alone. Gina is ready to go out: the child in front of them needs attention first.
Left with Gregers, Hedvig asks for an explanation. He puts it off until she is older, but her fear cannot be put off with it. She wonders whether Gina might have found her somewhere and taken her home. Perhaps that is what her father has discovered. Yet even if it were true, she reasons, he could still love her. The wild duck was a gift from elsewhere, and she loves it very much.
Her example grows from experience. A creature's arrival from outside has not cancelled the days of care that followed. She does not know how to establish her parentage. She knows that belonging can be made through attention. Gregers is being offered a child's account of attachment that already answers something the adults have made frightening.
She also tells him about praying for the duck. The practice began when her father was ill and she feared losing him. Later she added the bird, which had been weak when it arrived. The two concerns share an evening without competing. Giving the duck a place in her prayers has not taken her father out of them.
Gregers then asks whether she could freely sacrifice it for Hjalmar. She is startled and wants to know whether that would help. He urges her to try and asks about her courage. She agrees, thinking that her grandfather could assist. Before leaving, Gregers tells her not to confide in her mother, who would not understand them.
In this exchange, the bird changes roles. Hedvig has used it to show that attachment can survive an uncertain origin. Gregers makes losing it a way to authenticate another attachment. The more she values it, the stronger the proof. Her care is not dismissed; it is recruited to increase the worth of what she is asked to surrender.
The language of free choice cannot remove the fear already shaping her answer. Her first concern is whether the plan will bring her father back. She has not approached Gregers with a wish to give up the duck. An adult has offered a frightened child a method by which love might again become available, and made courage the condition of attempting it.
Secrecy narrows the conversation further. Gina has not understood everything either. But she has insisted that the child's immediate distress matters more urgently than the father's passage through an elevated emotional crisis. Now she is placed among those who cannot understand. One of the people most available to help Hedvig judge the plan is excluded from it.
And yet the child thinks again. Her morning hesitation is not a complete theory of what has gone wrong. It is a small interval in which a proposal heard under pressure loses its brilliance. She still wants her father. What has altered is her confidence that his love should have to be recovered in this particular way.
Gregers does not use the interval to reconsider his advice. He first suspects insufficient resolve, then treats her explanation as a sign of what growing up in this household has done to her. He invokes the things that make life valuable and the joy of brave sacrifice. He finishes by assuring her that he still believes in her.
Such confidence can sound generous while allowing only one acceptable answer. He believes she can carry out the plan; he does not extend the same confidence to her possibility of finding a reason against it. If she agrees, she is brave. If she doubts, something is lacking in her. The advice remains secure while the child's character becomes the subject of examination.
When Hjalmar returns, Hedvig runs towards him and is rejected again. Later he hesitates over his own departure. Tiredness, the weather, and practical difficulties make leaving immediately burdensome. He asks for breathing space, perhaps a day or two. His need for time is intelligible. The contrast lies in how little room Gregers has allowed the child for a morning's second thought.
The later catastrophe occurs in the loft. When a shot is heard, the adults do not yet know what has happened. Gregers supplies an interpretation: Hedvig has sacrificed the duck. Hjalmar is moved and begins looking for his daughter, ready to call her back to him. For a moment, Gregers thinks his account of the family's renewal has been confirmed.
This misreading is devastating in its own right. The father's tenderness seems to become available through a story about what the daughter has surrendered. The report has not been checked, and the child has not spoken. What she has supposedly proved reaches the adults before the urgent question of where she is and how she is faring.
They find her fatally injured. Relling confirms her death. Gina wants her taken into her own little room, away from being looked at by others, and the parents carry her there. The movement is practical and tender. While the adults' interpretations have repeatedly made Hedvig serve a larger purpose, her mother still has a particular child to look after.
After the parents leave, Gregers tries to find in Hjalmar's grief a reason that her death will not have been in vain. Relling challenges his expectation of lasting change. Neither man's prediction is a future the play has shown. Their disagreement again places the child beside the question of what her father will become.
If Hjalmar changes, her death does not become a worthwhile education. If he fails to change, her love does not become wasted. The question of his future cannot establish why she should have had to pay for it. Nor need we reduce the tragedy to one sentence of advice, or turn it into a defence of every family secret, to recognise the pressure Gregers adds.
Before the catastrophe, Hedvig has already made another possibility audible. Something that seemed beautiful yesterday seems wrong today. She still loves her father and still cares for the duck. Those attachments once fitted together in an evening prayer. A child should not have to destroy one before an adult will recognise the other.
海德维格睡过一夜,没有去做昨晚答应的事。格瑞格斯看见她,便说自己已经从她脸上看出来了。她解释,并非到了跟前就没有勇气,而是早晨醒来,重新想过,觉得那件事很奇怪。昨晚听起来那么美好,现在却想不出它有什么意义。她想改变的不是对父亲的心意,只是一个成年人交给她的办法。
那办法,是牺牲她最心爱的野鸭,使父亲重新相信她的爱。易卜生把这段谈话放在《野鸭》第五幕开头附近。父亲雅尔马已经离开过家,孩子正怕他再也不要自己。格瑞格斯是父亲的老朋友,原本希望揭开隐瞒,使这家人重新生活;可是到了此刻,要拿出一样珍贵东西的人,却成了没有制造那些隐瞒的海德维格。
前一晚,她甚至不知道自己究竟做错了什么。雅尔马得知妻子的往事,怀疑她不是自己的亲生女儿,要求她不要靠近。吉娜叫丈夫看看孩子,他却挣脱女儿走了。孩子哭着请母亲把他找回来;格瑞格斯还想让雅尔马独自经历完内心的挣扎,吉娜已经准备出门。她觉得首先该安顿眼前这个孩子,其他的可以以后再说。
母亲离开以后,海德维格向格瑞格斯询问缘由。他让她等长大再问,可她没有办法把此刻的难过也推迟到长大。她自己猜想,也许母亲是在什么地方捡到她的,父亲如今知道了。她没有掌握大人所说的全部往事,却已经能为自己找到一个理由:即使这样,父亲也仍然可以爱她,甚至更爱她。她家里的野鸭也是别人送来的,她照样那么喜欢它。
她用确实经历过的相处,回答一种突然降到身上的怀疑。野鸭从哪里来,没有取消她照料它的日子;一个人并非从来就在家里,也不意味着来到以后发生的亲近都是假的。她不知道怎样证明血缘,却知道爱护一只不是自己生下的鸟,并不需要勉强。
格瑞格斯于是顺着谈起野鸭。孩子告诉他,自己每晚都会为它祈祷。这件事最初还是为了父亲:雅尔马生病时,她害怕他死去,便自己开始祈祷;后来觉得野鸭刚来时也很虚弱,就把它也加进去。她没有从父亲那里拿走什么,再分给这只鸟。对于她,惦念它与惦念父亲,可以放在同一个晚上。
接下来,格瑞格斯问,若她自愿为了父亲牺牲这只野鸭呢?海德维格站起来,先是惊讶,随后问这样做是否有用。他让她试一试,又问她有没有足够的勇气。她答应尝试,并想请祖父帮忙。他最后嘱咐,不要告诉母亲,因为母亲不理解他们。
同一只鸟,在几句话里换了用途。孩子刚才用它说明,相处可以使一个原本从别处来的生命变得亲近;成年人却让她用失去它,来证明另一份亲近。野鸭越值得珍惜,这场证明就越有分量。她照料它的那些日子没有受到否认,反而被用来增加牺牲的价值:正因为那么爱它,放弃它才足够说明她爱父亲。
格瑞格斯确实使用了自愿的说法。他提议牺牲的是野鸭,他相信自己正在给孩子一条恢复家庭的路。可是海德维格最先问的是办法有没有用,并没有先表达放弃野鸭的愿望。父亲可能不要她的恐惧已经在场,另一个成年人又告诉她,勇敢的牺牲能够改变父亲。这样作出的答应,不能只凭没有一声命令,就被读成全无压力的决定。
保密还使母亲暂时退出了这项商量。吉娜不是总能把一切说对的人,也没有在那晚完全理解女儿;但她刚才至少坚持,先顾眼前的孩子,不必让她陪着父亲完成一场高尚的挣扎。如今她被归入不理解他们的人,女儿最容易求助的另一个成年人,便不能参与判断这个办法是否合适。理解被分成两边,留在懂得的一边,似乎也需要继续相信那个建议。
不过,一夜过去,海德维格还是重新想了。这正是开头那几句话值得停留的地方。她说,睡醒以后,觉得不再像昨晚那样了。一个在恐惧中听来的主意,经由自己的重新考虑,开始失去原先的光彩。她的犹疑并不是关于父亲值不值得爱,而是关于爱为什么要这样去证明。
格瑞格斯却没有跟她重新检查办法。他先猜她缺少勇气,听见解释以后,又认为她在这样的家庭里长大,难免有所退步。他说起真正使生活有价值的东西,说起勇敢而快乐的牺牲精神,最后仍表示相信她。 这份信任听起来温暖,却已经替孩子规定了怎样回应才算没有辜负。她可以被相信会做成,却不能同样被相信,或许已经发现了不该去做的理由。
于是,建议本身躲过了检查。若孩子答应,是她勇敢;若她不再觉得有道理,问题仍在她还不够勇敢。提出办法的人不必重新说明,毁掉野鸭为什么能回答父亲的疑虑,只需等待孩子变成能够完成办法的人。她的想法没有完全被禁止说出,却在说出以后,被换成了关于她品格的判断。
雅尔马随后回到家里,女儿欣喜地跑向他,再次被推开。母亲让她退到另一间屋。雅尔马一面收拾要带走的东西,一面又因疲惫、天气和种种难处犹豫,问自己能否暂留一两天。他需要喘息,不能一天承担全部负担。 对一个遭遇重大打击的人,这份需要并不难理解;可孩子刚刚争取的,也不过是让一夜之后的想法得到片刻停留。她却没有从格瑞格斯那里获得同样的宽容。
后来的灾难发生在阁楼里。枪声传来时,大人们还不知道发生了什么,格瑞格斯已先解释成孩子完成了牺牲野鸭的证明。雅尔马听后动情,开始寻找女儿,想把她叫到自己身边,甚至说起重新生活。孩子尚未被找到,朋友已经以为自己关于家庭重生的期待得到了证实。
这短短的误认,比一种单纯的计划失败更令人难过。它让父亲的爱仿佛只隔着一条他愿意相信的消息:女儿为他交出了最心爱的东西。但消息是否属实还没有核清,孩子也还不能亲自说话。她到底去了哪里、现在怎样,反而在那个关于她已经证明了什么的故事之后,才被重新寻找。
找到海德维格时,她已受到致命伤害,医生雷凌随后确认了死亡。吉娜不愿让孩子继续躺在外面供人观看,叫雅尔马帮忙,把她送回自己的小房间。两个人抬着她离开。 母亲没有在此讲出一套关于痛苦的解释,她只是还在照料这个孩子。一个具体的人,需要被带回她的地方。
父母离开以后,格瑞格斯仍试图从雅尔马的悲痛里找到孩子没有白白死去的理由,雷凌则反驳他对雅尔马此后改变的期待。 两个人对未来的断言都不是已经演出的未来,而这场争论又一次把孩子放到父亲将成为什么样的人的旁边,仿佛她的一生还需要由这个结果说明价值。
雅尔马以后会怎样,当然值得问,却不能替海德维格回答,她本来为什么必须付出。父亲若真的从此改变,失去女儿也不会变成一种值得安排的教育;他若没有改变,孩子曾有的爱也不因此成为白费。她的生命并不是押在大人是否成长上的东西。我们可以追问格瑞格斯怎样增加了压力,而不把一场牵涉多人的悲剧缩成某句话的单一后果,更不需要由此宣布所有隐瞒都应被保存。
再回到那个尚未发生灾难的早晨,海德维格其实已经给出了一个很小的回答:昨天觉得美好,今天想来不再如此。她仍然盼父亲回来,也仍然爱那只野鸭。这样的两份心意本来可以一起留在她的生活里。她不该非得先失去其中一份,才能使成年人肯听另一份是真的。
海德維格睡過一夜,沒有去做昨晚答應的事。格瑞格斯看見她,便說自己已經從她臉上看出來了。她解釋,並非到了跟前就沒有勇氣,而是早晨醒來,重新想過,覺得那件事很奇怪。昨晚聽起來那麼美好,現在卻想不出它有什麼意義。她想改變的不是對父親的心意,只是一個成年人交給她的辦法。
那辦法,是犧牲她最心愛的野鴨,使父親重新相信她的愛。易卜生把這段談話放在《野鴨》第五幕開頭附近。父親雅爾馬已經離開過家,孩子正怕他再也不要自己。格瑞格斯是父親的老朋友,原本希望揭開隱瞞,使這家人重新生活;可是到了此刻,要拿出一樣珍貴東西的人,卻成了沒有製造那些隱瞞的海德維格。
前一晚,她甚至不知道自己究竟做錯了什麼。雅爾馬得知妻子的往事,懷疑她不是自己的親生女兒,要求她不要靠近。吉娜叫丈夫看看孩子,他卻掙脫女兒走了。孩子哭著請母親把他找回來;格瑞格斯還想讓雅爾馬獨自經歷完內心的掙扎,吉娜已經準備出門。她覺得首先該安頓眼前這個孩子,其他的可以以後再說。
母親離開以後,海德維格向格瑞格斯詢問緣由。他讓她等長大再問,可她沒有辦法把此刻的難過也推遲到長大。她自己猜想,也許母親是在什麼地方撿到她的,父親如今知道了。她沒有掌握大人所說的全部往事,卻已經能為自己找到一個理由:即使這樣,父親也仍然可以愛她,甚至更愛她。她家裡的野鴨也是別人送來的,她照樣那麼喜歡它。
她用確實經歷過的相處,回答一種突然降到身上的懷疑。野鴨從哪裡來,沒有取消她照料它的日子;一個人並非從來就在家裡,也不意味著來到以後發生的親近都是假的。她不知道怎樣證明血緣,卻知道愛護一隻不是自己生下的鳥,並不需要勉強。
格瑞格斯於是順著談起野鴨。孩子告訴他,自己每晚都會為它祈禱。這件事最初還是為了父親:雅爾馬生病時,她害怕他死去,便自己開始祈禱;後來覺得野鴨剛來時也很虛弱,就把它也加進去。她沒有從父親那裡拿走什麼,再分給這只鳥。對於她,惦念它與惦念父親,可以放在同一個晚上。
接下來,格瑞格斯問,若她自願為了父親犧牲這只野鴨呢?海德維格站起來,先是驚訝,隨後問這樣做是否有用。他讓她試一試,又問她有沒有足夠的勇氣。她答應嘗試,並想請祖父幫忙。他最後囑咐,不要告訴母親,因為母親不理解他們。
同一隻鳥,在幾句話裡換了用途。孩子剛才用它說明,相處可以使一個原本從別處來的生命變得親近;成年人卻讓她用失去它,來證明另一份親近。野鴨越值得珍惜,這場證明就越有分量。她照料它的那些日子沒有受到否認,反而被用來增加犧牲的價值:正因為那麼愛它,放棄它才足夠說明她愛父親。
格瑞格斯確實使用了自願的說法。他提議犧牲的是野鴨,他相信自己正在給孩子一條恢復家庭的路。可是海德維格最先問的是辦法有沒有用,並沒有先表達放棄野鴨的願望。父親可能不要她的恐懼已經在場,另一個成年人又告訴她,勇敢的犧牲能夠改變父親。這樣作出的答應,不能只憑沒有一聲命令,就被讀成全無壓力的決定。
保密還使母親暫時退出了這項商量。吉娜不是總能把一切說對的人,也沒有在那晚完全理解女兒;但她剛才至少堅持,先顧眼前的孩子,不必讓她陪著父親完成一場高尚的掙扎。如今她被歸入不理解他們的人,女兒最容易求助的另一個成年人,便不能參與判斷這個辦法是否合適。理解被分成兩邊,留在懂得的一邊,似乎也需要繼續相信那個建議。
不過,一夜過去,海德維格還是重新想了。這正是開頭那幾句話值得停留的地方。她說,睡醒以後,覺得不再像昨晚那樣了。一個在恐懼中聽來的主意,經由自己的重新考慮,開始失去原先的光彩。她的猶疑並不是關於父親值不值得愛,而是關於愛為什麼要這樣去證明。
格瑞格斯卻沒有跟她重新檢查辦法。他先猜她缺少勇氣,聽見解釋以後,又認為她在這樣的家庭裡長大,難免有所退步。他說起真正使生活有價值的東西,說起勇敢而快樂的犧牲精神,最後仍表示相信她。 這份信任聽起來溫暖,卻已經替孩子規定了怎樣回應才算沒有辜負。她可以被相信會做成,卻不能同樣被相信,或許已經發現了不該去做的理由。
於是,建議本身躲過了檢查。若孩子答應,是她勇敢;若她不再覺得有道理,問題仍在她還不夠勇敢。提出辦法的人不必重新說明,毀掉野鴨為什麼能回答父親的疑慮,只需等待孩子變成能夠完成辦法的人。她的想法沒有完全被禁止說出,卻在說出以後,被換成了關於她品格的判斷。
雅爾馬隨後回到家裡,女兒欣喜地跑向他,再次被推開。母親讓她退到另一間屋。雅爾馬一面收拾要帶走的東西,一面又因疲憊、天氣和種種難處猶豫,問自己能否暫留一兩天。他需要喘息,不能一天承擔全部負擔。 對一個遭遇重大打擊的人,這份需要並不難理解;可孩子剛剛爭取的,也不過是讓一夜之後的想法得到片刻停留。她卻沒有從格瑞格斯那裡獲得同樣的寬容。
後來的災難發生在閣樓裡。槍聲傳來時,大人們還不知道發生了什麼,格瑞格斯已先解釋成孩子完成了犧牲野鴨的證明。雅爾馬聽後動情,開始尋找女兒,想把她叫到自己身邊,甚至說起重新生活。孩子尚未被找到,朋友已經以為自己關於家庭重生的期待得到了證實。
這短短的誤認,比一種單純的計劃失敗更令人難過。它讓父親的愛彷彿只隔著一條他願意相信的消息:女兒為他交出了最心愛的東西。但消息是否屬實還沒有核清,孩子也還不能親自說話。她到底去了哪裡、現在怎樣,反而在那個關於她已經證明瞭什麼的故事之後,才被重新尋找。
找到海德維格時,她已受到致命傷害,醫生雷凌隨後確認了死亡。吉娜不願讓孩子繼續躺在外面供人觀看,叫雅爾馬幫忙,把她送回自己的小房間。兩個人抬著她離開。 母親沒有在此講出一套關於痛苦的解釋,她只是還在照料這個孩子。一個具體的人,需要被帶回她的地方。
父母離開以後,格瑞格斯仍試圖從雅爾馬的悲痛裡找到孩子沒有白白死去的理由,雷凌則反駁他對雅爾馬此後改變的期待。 兩個人對未來的斷言都不是已經演出的未來,而這場爭論又一次把孩子放到父親將成為什麼樣的人的旁邊,彷彿她的一生還需要由這個結果說明價值。
雅爾馬以後會怎樣,當然值得問,卻不能替海德維格回答,她本來為什麼必須付出。父親若真的從此改變,失去女兒也不會變成一種值得安排的教育;他若沒有改變,孩子曾有的愛也不因此成為白費。她的生命並不是押在大人是否成長上的東西。我們可以追問格瑞格斯怎樣增加了壓力,而不把一場牽涉多人的悲劇縮成某句話的單一後果,更不需要由此宣佈所有隱瞞都應被保存。
再回到那個尚未發生災難的早晨,海德維格其實已經給出了一個很小的回答:昨天覺得美好,今天想來不再如此。她仍然盼父親回來,也仍然愛那只野鴨。這樣的兩份心意本來可以一起留在她的生活裡。她不該非得先失去其中一份,才能使成年人肯聽另一份是真的。
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This essay discusses the end of Act IV and Act V of The Wild Duck, including Hedvig's death. It follows Eleanor Marx Aveling's translation, available as Project Gutenberg eBook 73631. The discussion names the tragic outcome without describing the method in detail.
本文细读《野鸭》第四幕末与第五幕,包含孩子死亡的结局。底本为 Eleanor Marx Aveling 英译、Project Gutenberg eBook 73631。中文对白据该本译述;保留剧情后果,不展开伤害方法。
本文細讀《野鴨》第四幕末與第五幕,包含孩子死亡的結局。底本為 Eleanor Marx Aveling 英譯、Project Gutenberg eBook 73631。中文對白據該本譯述;保留劇情後果,不展開傷害方法。