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Structures in Drama戏剧里的结构戲劇裡的結構 · 13 / 23

Tellheim Can Help Minna. Why Can't She Help Him?

特尔海姆愿意帮助米娜,却不肯让米娜帮助自己

特爾海姆願意幫助米娜,卻不肯讓米娜幫助自己

Minna von Barnhelm · Gotthold Ephraim Lessing

米娜·冯·巴恩赫尔姆 · 戈特霍尔德·埃夫莱姆·莱辛

米娜·馮·巴恩赫爾姆 · 戈特霍爾德·埃夫萊姆·萊辛

His fiancée must not be burdened by his misfortune. When he believes she has lost everything too, suddenly he is ready to marry.

她已经带着爱来到他面前,他却要先把困难全部解决,才肯与她生活。直到她假装失去了自己的财产。

她已經帶著愛來到他面前,他卻要先把困難全部解決,才肯與她生活。直到她假裝失去了自己的財產。

Han Qin (秦汉秦汉秦漢) ·

These readings discuss key scenes and endings. They read the plays, not particular stage or screen productions.

本系列涉及关键剧情与结局,阅读对象是剧本文本,而非某一场舞台演出或影视改编。

本系列涉及關鍵劇情與結局,閱讀對象是劇本文本,而非某一場舞台演出或影視改編。

Tellheim needs money, and now he cannot get it quickly enough. His friend Werner tries to share some good news. Never mind that: give him what is available and find more. Werner is astonished. The major who made borrowing seem impossible a little while ago is suddenly impatient to borrow. Has he heard that the money owed to him will be restored? Tellheim dismisses the rumor. He intends to repay Werner, but cannot say when or how.

Earlier, that uncertainty was precisely his reason for refusing help. Werner offered a loan; Tellheim worried about his friend's future. The money should remain available for Werner's own plans, not disappear into the needs of a man whose circumstances might never improve. Every assurance that Werner could spare it produced another attempt to protect him. One man said he could give. The other answered on his behalf that he must not.

Werner tried recalling military life. When Tellheim was thirsty, he had accepted water from his flask without a debate about the propriety of receiving it. Werner had also saved his life twice. Tellheim acknowledged this and would have done the same for him. They trusted one another to risk death. Somehow a temporary loan was more than the friendship could accommodate.

Werner had not come to admire the spectacle of a noble man suffering alone. He wanted to do something. Tellheim valued him, but expressed that value by preventing him from taking a risk he had already chosen. His friend was left having to prove, repeatedly, that he possessed both the money and the desire to help.

Lessing gives Tellheim's reluctance a real history. During the war, he reduced the burden of an imposed contribution by advancing his own money. The arrangement later exposed him to suspicion of corruption. He is fighting for his reputation as well as the funds. Discharged, wounded and short of cash, he has even pawned his engagement ring. When Minna finds him, he believes the man who could marry her no longer exists.

For Minna, the generosity that caused his trouble was where love began. She heard about his conduct before meeting him and deliberately sought an occasion to do so. Now she sees the same unwillingness to let other people suffer turned toward her as a reason to keep her away. She does not propose that money make the injury disappear. She wants to discuss the life they could share after it has happened.

Tellheim insists that she deserves a husband beyond reproach in the world's eyes. He cannot expose her to contempt or depend for all his happiness on a woman's favor. He understands this as protection. From her side, it leaves an awkward division of roles: she may be worthy of his sacrifice, but not competent to decide what she would offer him. The future he is preparing on her behalf has surprisingly little room for her participation.

Minna has no intention of waiting indefinitely. She and her maid Franziska have prepared a deception. Minna pretends to accept his reasoning, gives back a ring and withdraws. Franziska supplies the explanation: her mistress has defied her uncle's marriage plans, been disinherited and come to Tellheim with no support left. The audience knows that this account is invented. Tellheim believes it.

That belief produces the urgent borrowing with which we began. He will marry Minna, leave with her and find a way to earn a living elsewhere. First he must redeem the pawned ring. A debt he could not contemplate for his own sake becomes possible for hers. Marriage, which had to await the clarification of everything, suddenly acquires an imminent date. Werner worries about Minna's trouble, rejoices at the wedding and can finally put his money to use.

The change has an appealing energy. Tellheim can see something to do. Feeling needed restores his capacity to meet an uncertain future. That vitality need not be dismissed as mere vanity. Still, the contrast hurts. Minna was already present, already loved him, already wanted to share his life. Why did that not count as a beginning? Must she lose something before he can bear to love her in practice?

Her wealth gives her no right to command him. Nor is a person obliged to accept every gift that is offered. But these two are discussing marriage, not an isolated transaction. If he must solve all difficulties outside the relationship before returning to it, she receives a promise of protection while being excluded from much of the common life. His devotion prepares a future in which her contribution will not be necessary.

Then a royal letter arrives. His conduct is vindicated and the repayment of his advance is addressed. This is a material change, not merely an encouraging word. Delighted, he asks Minna to read it and begins imagining where they will live. She almost yields to the prospect. Instead, she continues playing the impoverished fiancée who cannot burden him. His own solemn arguments return from a different mouth.

Now he objects. Why should losing property make her unfit to marry the person who loves her? Minna points out the resemblance to what he has been saying. He does not immediately accept a common standard. Men and women occupy different positions, he argues; the man is supposed to support the woman. The trick lets him feel the force of being pushed away for his own good. It does not instantly dissolve the beliefs that made him push her away.

And the trick begins escaping its author's control. News about the ring convinces Tellheim that Minna has been plotting to break their engagement. Affection becomes evidence of deception. Werner arrives with more money at exactly the wrong moment and is rebuffed again. First forbidden to help, then hurried into helping, he now suffers anger caused by somebody else's misunderstanding. Franziska has been anxious all along. Minna finally admits that her joke has gone too far.

A role reversal can expose a contradiction. It cannot guarantee that the people inside it remain available for the lesson. By now a friend is offended, affection has become suspect and the person who devised the story is desperate to stop it. Minna wants a life with Tellheim, not permanent access to him through the performance of helplessness. She must be able to speak from her actual circumstances again.

The ring makes an explanation possible. Minna has already retrieved the one Tellheim pawned. When she appeared to end the engagement, she handed him his own ring, not the ring he had once given her. What he read as her withdrawal was an object she had recovered for him. She shows him the distinction and puts it back on his finger. The help he was urgently arranging to perform for himself has already arrived from her.

Tellheim also stays behind to repair things with Werner. He acknowledges having angered his friend and they shake hands. Even now, he finds a familiar way to accept the money: he can keep it safe for Werner rather than consider himself a borrower. The old pride survives in the accommodation. Their reconciliation belongs to these particular men, not to replacements who have emerged perfectly educated from a comedy.

The public suspicion has lifted, and Minna's uncle does not oppose the marriage. Neither the returned ring nor the happy arrangement tells us how they will meet every later reversal. What we can see is this occasion. Tellheim wanted to recover the ring before he could offer Minna a life. She recovered it first and put it on his hand. For once, the gesture was allowed to reach him. She did not have to become destitute in order to possess something he could receive.

特尔海姆终于找到维尔纳,开口便要钱。朋友本来准备告诉他一个好消息,他却连听完的耐心也没有:先把手头的钱给他,再尽量筹些来。维尔纳几乎不敢相信。这位少校刚才还把借钱说得那么艰难,现在却嫌他给得不够快。难道少校已经知道,拖欠的款项要发还了?特尔海姆不信,还责怪朋友轻信传闻。他愿意归还,但什么时候还、怎么还,此刻都不能保证。

不久以前,不能保证还钱,恰好是他不肯借钱的理由。维尔纳想帮他渡过难关,他却替朋友打算起来:钱应该留着,为将来、为前程,不能耗在一个处境不明的人身上。朋友越说自己不急用,他越觉得有责任替对方守住。于是,同一笔钱停在两个人中间,给的人说可以,收的人替他说不可以。

维尔纳只好说起战场上的旧事。那时少校渴了,接过他的水壶便喝,并没有先商量这种相助是否合乎身份。何况自己还救过他两次性命,难道命可以托付,钱反而不能?特尔海姆承认,也相信自己在同样处境下一定会救他。两个人都不怀疑对方肯冒生命危险,偏偏一到暂时借钱过日子,交情就过不去了。

维尔纳不是来观看一个高尚的人如何独自忍受困难的,也不愿每一次好意都被退回,再附上一份为自己前程所作的周到安排。特尔海姆珍惜这位朋友,却把珍惜落实成了不许朋友承担风险。对方已经愿意做的事,又被他重新判定为不该做;朋友只能继续举证,说明自己确实愿意,而且确实有钱。

少校当然不是无缘无故地难以接受帮助。他在战时执行征款任务,曾用自己的钱垫上不足,减轻当地人的负担;后来,这项垫款反被怀疑是收受好处的凭据。他要争回的不只是一笔钱,也包括自己的清白。如今退伍、负伤、手头困窘,连订婚戒指都交给仆人拿去抵押了。米娜远道找到他,他却觉得,自己已经不是当初那个可以与她成婚的人。

对米娜来说,使他陷入麻烦的那次慷慨,正是她爱上他的起点。她还没见过他,便听说了那件事,后来特意去他可能出现的聚会。现在他站在面前,仍然是那个不肯轻易让别人受苦的人,为什么这份心意一转向她,竟成了拒绝相守的理由?她想同他商量的,是损失已经发生以后,两个人还能怎样生活。

可是特尔海姆坚持,在世人的眼里,米娜应该有一个无可指摘的丈夫。他不能让爱人跟着受人轻视,更不能把自己的全部幸福寄托在一个女人的眷顾上。他自以为正在保护她;听到的却可能是另一件事:她可以值得他为之付出,却还不能由自己决定,愿意为他付出什么。他已经替她决定,不该承担这些;她愿意怎样生活的回答,始终改不了这个决定。

米娜不是一直耐心等待的人。她早已和侍女弗兰齐斯卡商量了一个恶作剧,这时便开始照约定演下去。她摆出被说服的样子,把戒指交回,表示自己也不愿拖累他,随后进了房间。特尔海姆还没弄清发生什么,侍女又告诉他,小姐为了拒绝伯父安排的婚事,已经被剥夺继承资格,失去依靠,只好出来找他。读者知道这是两人编好的故事,他却全信了。

接下来才有了开头那场急切的借钱。他要和米娜结婚,带她离开,再到别处谋生;还要先把抵押出去的戒指赎回来。刚才不能承担的债务,现在可以承担了,刚才非得等到处境完全澄清才能作的决定,现在也有了日期。维尔纳听他说小姐遭了难,替他担忧;听他说很快就要结婚,又马上替他高兴。钱终于交了出去,仿佛那道难以越过的障碍,忽然从朋友眼前撤开。

想到米娜需要他,特尔海姆便重新觉得自己还有用处,连不确定的未来都可以迎上去。这份振作是真实的,也很可爱;但把前后放在一起,仍然令人有一点心酸。米娜原来已经来到他身边,愿意同他生活,那时的她为什么还不够使生活重新开始?难道她也必须先失去些什么,才能让他放心地爱她?

她当然不因比他富有,就取得指挥他的资格;拒绝一份自己不愿承担的馈赠,也并非天生有错。可他们原本谈的是结婚,是此后怎样一起承受变化。如果所有困难都得由他先在外面解决干净,才能回来与她相见,那么她得到的虽然是被保护的承诺,却没有多少共同生活的余地。她只能等他准备好一个不需要她参与的未来。

王室来信随后到了,证实他的清白,并下令处理垫款归还等事。原先挡在生活面前的实际障碍松动了。他兴奋地让米娜读信,把好消息说成两个人的好消息,还谈起以后可以去哪里安家。她几乎也被这幅生活打动,却仍继续扮演那个失去财产、不能拖累他的未婚妻。于是,他先前那些郑重的话,换了一张嘴,又朝他走回来。

特尔海姆立刻觉得她说错了。他爱的是她,失去财产为什么会使她不配结婚?可当米娜指出这些正是他自己的理由时,他没有就此承认两个人应该用同一套尺度。他还要争辩男女各有位置,认为男人本来就该支撑女人。她的安排让他尝到了被替人着想的话推开的滋味,却没有使所有旧想法自动消失。

而且,玩笑也不再完全听她指挥。关于戒指的消息忽然传来,特尔海姆误以为她从一开始就在谋划解除婚约,顿时把刚才的亲近改听成欺骗。维尔纳偏偏又在这时带着新筹的钱进来,被他连人带钱拒绝。这个朋友先是不准帮忙,后来被催着帮忙,现在终于办好了事,又被一阵与自己无关的愤怒推开。弗兰齐斯卡一直提心吊胆;米娜终于向侍女承认,自己把玩笑开过了头。她走过去想解释,特尔海姆却已经不肯听。

一句话换个说话的人,确实让他尝到了原先不肯看见的滋味;可此刻站在房间里的人,已经不只是在交换道理。朋友生了气,感情成了可疑之物,编故事的人也开始着急。米娜想得到的,原本是两个人可以一起生活,不是一个必须靠自己装作落难才肯亲近的爱人。这个故事得停下来,她才能重新用自己的处境同他说话。

事情终于说开时,戒指本身替他们省掉了一番抽象争论。原来米娜早已从店主那里取回少校抵押的那一枚;她假装退婚时,交给他的正是这枚戒指,而不是他从前送给她的那枚。他一直以为自己收回了婚约,其实手里拿着的是她替他找回的东西。她让他看清,随后亲手把它戴回他的手指。

后来,特尔海姆没有立刻跟着大家走开,而是留下来找维尔纳说话。他承认自己刚才惹怒了朋友,两人握手和好。可这次收钱,他又替自己找到一个熟悉的位置:不必再作借款人,可以替朋友保管。这个小小的转弯仍带着他的老脾气,倒使和好更像发生在原来那两个人之间,而不是忽然换上两个已被教好的新人。

至于米娜,戒指已经戴回去了,她所希望的生活却不能只靠这件小事作保。外面的诬疑已经澄清,伯父也不反对婚事;往后的困难会以什么样子回来,戏没有继续演下去。我们能看见的是这一次:他苦苦设法想先赎回的东西,她已经替他取回;她伸手给他戴上,他终于没有再把这份心意退还。她不必先变得一无所有,才有东西可以给他。

特爾海姆終於找到維爾納,開口便要錢。朋友本來準備告訴他一個好消息,他卻連聽完的耐心也沒有:先把手頭的錢給他,再盡量籌些來。維爾納幾乎不敢相信。這位少校剛才還把借錢說得那麼艱難,現在卻嫌他給得不夠快。難道少校已經知道,拖欠的款項要發還了?特爾海姆不信,還責怪朋友輕信傳聞。他願意歸還,但什麼時候還、怎麼還,此刻都不能保證。

不久以前,不能保證還錢,恰好是他不肯借錢的理由。維爾納想幫他渡過難關,他卻替朋友打算起來:錢應該留著,為將來、為前程,不能耗在一個處境不明的人身上。朋友越說自己不急用,他越覺得有責任替對方守住。於是,同一筆錢停在兩個人中間,給的人說可以,收的人替他說不可以。

維爾納只好說起戰場上的舊事。那時少校渴了,接過他的水壺便喝,並沒有先商量這種相助是否合乎身分。何況自己還救過他兩次性命,難道命可以托付,錢反而不能?特爾海姆承認,也相信自己在同樣處境下一定會救他。兩個人都不懷疑對方肯冒生命危險,偏偏一到暫時借錢過日子,交情就過不去了。

維爾納不是來觀看一個高尚的人如何獨自忍受困難的,也不願每一次好意都被退回,再附上一份為自己前程所作的周到安排。特爾海姆珍惜這位朋友,卻把珍惜落實成了不許朋友承擔風險。對方已經願意做的事,又被他重新判定為不該做;朋友只能繼續舉證,說明自己確實願意,而且確實有錢。

少校當然不是無緣無故地難以接受幫助。他在戰時執行徵款任務,曾用自己的錢墊上不足,減輕當地人的負擔;後來,這項墊款反被懷疑是收受好處的憑據。他要爭回的不只是一筆錢,也包括自己的清白。如今退伍、負傷、手頭困窘,連訂婚戒指都交給僕人拿去抵押了。米娜遠道找到他,他卻覺得,自己已經不是當初那個可以與她成婚的人。

對米娜來說,使他陷入麻煩的那次慷慨,正是她愛上他的起點。她還沒見過他,便聽說了那件事,後來特意去他可能出現的聚會。現在他站在面前,仍然是那個不肯輕易讓別人受苦的人,為什麼這份心意一轉向她,竟成了拒絕相守的理由?她想同他商量的,是損失已經發生以後,兩個人還能怎樣生活。

可是特爾海姆堅持,在世人的眼裡,米娜應該有一個無可指摘的丈夫。他不能讓愛人跟著受人輕視,更不能把自己的全部幸福寄託在一個女人的眷顧上。他自以為正在保護她;聽到的卻可能是另一件事:她可以值得他為之付出,卻還不能由自己決定,願意為他付出什麼。他已經替她決定,不該承擔這些;她願意怎樣生活的回答,始終改不了這個決定。

米娜不是一直耐心等待的人。她早已和侍女弗蘭齊斯卡商量了一個惡作劇,這時便開始照約定演下去。她擺出被說服的樣子,把戒指交回,表示自己也不願拖累他,隨後進了房間。特爾海姆還沒弄清發生什麼,侍女又告訴他,小姐為了拒絕伯父安排的婚事,已經被剝奪繼承資格,失去依靠,只好出來找他。讀者知道這是兩人編好的故事,他卻全信了。

接下來才有了開頭那場急切的借錢。他要和米娜結婚,帶她離開,再到別處謀生;還要先把抵押出去的戒指贖回來。剛才不能承擔的債務,現在可以承擔了,剛才非得等到處境完全澄清才能作的決定,現在也有了日期。維爾納聽他說小姐遭了難,替他擔憂;聽他說很快就要結婚,又馬上替他高興。錢終於交了出去,彷彿那道難以越過的障礙,忽然從朋友眼前撤開。

想到米娜需要他,特爾海姆便重新覺得自己還有用處,連不確定的未來都可以迎上去。這份振作是真實的,也很可愛;但把前後放在一起,仍然令人有一點心酸。米娜原來已經來到他身邊,願意同他生活,那時的她為什麼還不夠使生活重新開始?難道她也必須先失去些什麼,才能讓他放心地愛她?

她當然不因比他富有,就取得指揮他的資格;拒絕一份自己不願承擔的饋贈,也並非天生有錯。可他們原本談的是結婚,是此後怎樣一起承受變化。如果所有困難都得由他先在外面解決乾淨,才能回來與她相見,那麼她得到的雖然是被保護的承諾,卻沒有多少共同生活的餘地。她只能等他準備好一個不需要她參與的未來。

王室來信隨後到了,證實他的清白,並下令處理墊款歸還等事。原先擋在生活面前的實際障礙鬆動了。他興奮地讓米娜讀信,把好消息說成兩個人的好消息,還談起以後可以去哪裡安家。她幾乎也被這幅生活打動,卻仍繼續扮演那個失去財產、不能拖累他的未婚妻。於是,他先前那些鄭重的話,換了一張嘴,又朝他走回來。

特爾海姆立刻覺得她說錯了。他愛的是她,失去財產為什麼會使她不配結婚?可當米娜指出這些正是他自己的理由時,他沒有就此承認兩個人應該用同一套尺度。他還要爭辯男女各有位置,認為男人本來就該支撐女人。她的安排讓他嘗到了被替人著想的話推開的滋味,卻沒有使所有舊想法自動消失。

而且,玩笑也不再完全聽她指揮。關於戒指的消息忽然傳來,特爾海姆誤以為她從一開始就在謀劃解除婚約,頓時把剛才的親近改聽成欺騙。維爾納偏偏又在這時帶著新籌的錢進來,被他連人帶錢拒絕。這個朋友先是不准幫忙,後來被催著幫忙,現在終於辦好了事,又被一陣與自己無關的憤怒推開。弗蘭齊斯卡一直提心弔膽;米娜終於向侍女承認,自己把玩笑開過了頭。她走過去想解釋,特爾海姆卻已經不肯聽。

一句話換個說話的人,確實讓他嘗到了原先不肯看見的滋味;可此刻站在房間裡的人,已經不只是在交換道理。朋友生了氣,感情成了可疑之物,編故事的人也開始著急。米娜想得到的,原本是兩個人可以一起生活,不是一個必須靠自己裝作落難才肯親近的愛人。這個故事得停下來,她才能重新用自己的處境同他說話。

事情終於說開時,戒指本身替他們省掉了一番抽象爭論。原來米娜早已從店主那裡取回少校抵押的那一枚;她假裝退婚時,交給他的正是這枚戒指,而不是他從前送給她的那枚。他一直以為自己收回了婚約,其實手裡拿著的是她替他找回的東西。她讓他看清,隨後親手把它戴回他的手指。

後來,特爾海姆沒有立刻跟著大家走開,而是留下來找維爾納說話。他承認自己剛才惹怒了朋友,兩人握手和好。可這次收錢,他又替自己找到一個熟悉的位置:不必再作借款人,可以替朋友保管。這個小小的轉彎仍帶著他的老脾氣,倒使和好更像發生在原來那兩個人之間,而不是忽然換上兩個已被教好的新人。

至於米娜,戒指已經戴回去了,她所希望的生活卻不能只靠這件小事作保。外面的誣疑已經澄清,伯父也不反對婚事;往後的困難會以什麼樣子回來,戲沒有繼續演下去。我們能看見的是這一次:他苦苦設法想先贖回的東西,她已經替他取回;她伸手給他戴上,他終於沒有再把這份心意退還。她不必先變得一無所有,才有東西可以給他。

Text & sources文本与来源文本與來源

Based on Ernest Bell's translation of Minna von Barnhelm, with the German text in Dartmouth Annotext for comparison. The central sequence runs from the end of Act IV through Act V; Werner's earlier appeal about water and saving Tellheim's life appears in Act III, scene 7. Dialogue is paraphrased.

依据莱辛《米娜·冯·巴恩赫尔姆》Ernest Bell英译,并参照Dartmouth Annotext所收德文。重点为第四幕末至第五幕;维尔纳以水壶和救命相劝的谈话见第三幕第七场。中文人物话语为译述。

依據萊辛《米娜·馮·巴恩赫爾姆》Ernest Bell英譯,並參照Dartmouth Annotext所收德文。重點為第四幕末至第五幕;維爾納以水壺和救命相勸的談話見第三幕第七場。中文人物話語為譯述。